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November's breath is chill Beneath daubed clouds of grey While distant echoes shrill Departed souls do stray Amongst innocent bystanders Lady death meanders AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on September 27, 2019 for contest MAKE IT SIX (photo #2) sponsored by JOSEPH MAY

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Hello There

Date: 10/4/2019 11:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest, Line!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/5/2019 3:32:00 PM

Hello There, Thanks for your visit and comment.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/4/2019 1:39:00 PM

A haunting write, Line... You've picked the perfect month, November, for this gray setting. All in all, a superb portrayal of a bleak scene. So well penned! Congrats on your win in the contest. Warmest wishes, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/5/2019 3:32:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Joseph May

Date: 10/3/2019 8:05:00 PM

Very nicely rendered Line, Congrats on your win..

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/3/2019 8:06:00 PM

Thanks, Joseph. Most appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 9/29/2019 4:17:00 PM

Love it! Dark and deep and makes me think!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/29/2019 7:43:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Timothy.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/27/2019 10:03:00 PM

Definitely a winner. Blessings to you

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/27/2019 11:42:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Regina.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/27/2019 8:57:00 PM

Powerfully chilling write that takes us from grey to black.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/27/2019 9:03:00 PM

Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.

Hello There

Date: 9/27/2019 7:37:00 PM

Loved this, Line ~ oh my gosh, so eerie and, combined with the picture, I actually got chills. Best of luck for the contest!! Seems like a winner to me!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/27/2019 9:03:00 PM

Hello there, thanks for your lovely visit and compliment.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/27/2019 5:36:00 PM

Great one Line. Well done :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/27/2019 9:03:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi. Much appreciated.

Chris Green

Date: 9/27/2019 4:50:00 PM

Really cool Line. This fits the photo perfectly. Best wishes in the contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/27/2019 9:02:00 PM

Thank so much, Chris. Much appreciated.