Line Gauthier Poet Rhyme

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November Greys

November's breath is chill
Beneath daubed clouds of grey 
While distant echoes shrill 
Departed souls do stray
Amongst innocent bystanders
Lady death meanders



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

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Hello There October 4, 2019 at 11:29 PM Congratulations on your placement in the contest, Line!! Line Gauthier October 5, 2019 at 3:32 PM Hello There, Thanks for your visit and comment.

Gershon Wolf October 4, 2019 at 1:39 PM A haunting write, Line... You've picked the perfect month, November, for this gray setting. All in all, a superb portrayal of a bleak scene. So well penned! Congrats on your win in the contest. Warmest wishes, Gershon Line Gauthier October 5, 2019 at 3:32 PM Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Joseph May October 3, 2019 at 8:05 PM Very nicely rendered Line, Congrats on your win.. Line Gauthier October 3, 2019 at 8:06 PM Thanks, Joseph. Most appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire September 29, 2019 at 4:17 PM Love it! Dark and deep and makes me think! Line Gauthier September 29, 2019 at 7:43 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Timothy.

Regina Mcintosh September 27, 2019 at 10:03 PM Definitely a winner. Blessings to you Line Gauthier September 27, 2019 at 11:42 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Regina.

M. L. Kiser September 27, 2019 at 8:57 PM Powerfully chilling write that takes us from grey to black. Line Gauthier September 27, 2019 at 9:03 PM Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.

Hello There September 27, 2019 at 7:37 PM Loved this, Line ~ oh my gosh, so eerie and, combined with the picture, I actually got chills. Best of luck for the contest!! Seems like a winner to me! Line Gauthier September 27, 2019 at 9:03 PM Hello there, thanks for your lovely visit and compliment.

Heidi Sands September 27, 2019 at 5:36 PM Great one Line. Well done :) Line Gauthier September 27, 2019 at 9:03 PM Thanks, Heidi. Much appreciated.

Chris Green September 27, 2019 at 4:50 PM Really cool Line. This fits the photo perfectly. Best wishes in the contest. Line Gauthier September 27, 2019 at 9:02 PM Thank so much, Chris. Much appreciated.