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November Dreams

November's colors pale as winds and storms begin Fall sentinels are now excused and turn their faces inward Dreams of the fire's warmth and comfort become a reality

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Joseph May

Date: 10/12/2014 7:15:00 PM

Congrats on the win BG

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/12/2014 6:49:00 PM

This is gorgeous Barbara. Congratulations on your win.

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 10/12/2014 7:02:00 PM

Hey! Glad you stopped by..always good to get some positive feedback. BG

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2014 5:37:00 AM

absolutely beautifully penned many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 10/12/2014 7:02:00 PM

Thanks Jan..thanks for your continued support. Barbara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/12/2014 2:05:00 AM

Nicely crafted piece on November dreams, Barb. congrats

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 10/12/2014 7:01:00 PM

Thank you dear Dr Ram..appreciate you always being supportive.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2014 12:40:00 AM

HOw nice this is, Barbara. I love that last line, dreams of fire's warmth. The one thing along with Xmas we can look forward to in the following month. Congrats in my contest.

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 10/12/2014 7:00:00 PM

Soupy BG

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/8/2014 4:17:00 PM

Beautiful November Sijo! I loved Barb! God luck in the contest! ;) Love peace and light! xxxx D.

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 10/8/2014 4:19:00 PM

thank you for taking the time to stop by. Glad you liked it..I love the fall/winter so much. BG

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/8/2014 1:16:00 PM

Oh my.....I love this. It has a rather sad, melancholy quality that is perfect for a season's change. :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/7/2014 5:50:00 PM

Beautiful Sijo BG.....I love the last line....

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/7/2014 1:45:00 PM

Dear Barbara, You described so well the way I remember fall coming to an end when I lived in NJ. Each line is beautiful and the middle one is quite remarkable. How wonderful it would be to dream of "fire's warmth and comfort" again! Excellent write, my friend. Still need your address, dear. Love, Carolyn

Skat A

Date: 10/7/2014 12:47:00 PM

awesome. skat

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/7/2014 4:33:00 AM

- Lovely poem, Barbara ....... with the cozy warmth of the fireplace - Have a nice day - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 10/6/2014 11:29:00 PM

Good.