November Dreams

November's colors pale as winds and storms begin Fall sentinels are now excused and turn their faces inward Dreams of the fire's warmth and comfort become a reality
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May Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 7:15 PM
Congrats on the win BG
Yvonne Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 6:49 PM
This is gorgeous Barbara. Congratulations on your win.
Gorelick Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 7:02 PM
Hey! Glad you stopped by..always good to get some positive feedback. BG
Allison Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:37 AM
absolutely beautifully penned many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Gorelick Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 7:02 PM
Thanks Jan..thanks for your continued support. Barbara
Mehta Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 2:05 AM
Nicely crafted piece on November dreams, Barb. congrats
Gorelick Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 7:01 PM
Thank you dear Dr Ram..appreciate you always being supportive.
Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 12:40 AM
HOw nice this is, Barbara. I love that last line, dreams of fire's warmth. The one thing along with Xmas we can look forward to in the following month. Congrats in my contest.
Gorelick Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 7:00 PM
Soupy BG
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 4:17 PM
Beautiful November Sijo! I loved Barb! God luck in the contest! ;) Love peace and light! xxxx D.
Gorelick Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 4:19 PM
thank you for taking the time to stop by. Glad you liked it..I love the fall/winter so much. BG
Richards Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 1:16 PM
Oh my.....I love this. It has a rather sad, melancholy quality that is perfect for a season's change. :)
May Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 5:50 PM
Beautiful Sijo BG.....I love the last line....
Devonshire Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 1:45 PM
Dear Barbara, You described so well the way I remember fall coming to an end when I lived in NJ. Each line is beautiful and the middle one is quite remarkable. How wonderful it would be to dream of "fire's warmth and comfort" again! Excellent write, my friend. Still need your address, dear. Love, Carolyn
A  Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 12:47 PM
awesome. skat
Andresen Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 4:33 AM
- Lovely poem, Barbara ....... with the cozy warmth of the fireplace - Have a nice day - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Thajudeen Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 11:29 PM
Good.
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