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November Dreams

The golden leaves of autumn place imprints in the soft ground,
as brittle naked limbs invite the coming frost in submission,
and winter creeps upon footprints of autumn without notice

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/12/2014 9:21:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning splendid write Frederic!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2014 5:41:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Frederic:-) hugs Jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/12/2014 5:25:00 AM

Well penned November Dreams, Frederic, congrats on the win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2014 12:49:00 AM

A lovely picture of fall, Frederic. Thanks for supporting my contest. I really enjoyed seeing all my entries. They were all so good this time. Congrats for your win.

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/7/2014 6:01:00 PM

The change of seasons must have given you some great inspiration to write this fine work! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/6/2014 4:12:00 PM

Wow! "Winter creeps upon footprints of autumn" is an amazingly creative description, personifying winter. I don't know much about this form, but I know what I enjoy reading, so you get a seven rating, Frederic. Hope you are enjoying autumn and I wish you success in Andrea's contest. Love, Carolyn

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/6/2014 2:29:00 PM

So beautifully worded Fred! Love the title also. November I love it is my month of birth and is part of fall which my very favorite season of all the 4 we are gifted by God with nature to enjoy. Give you a 7 for this Sijo! Hugs! Love and light my poet friend! xxxx D.

John Lawless

Date: 10/6/2014 1:25:00 PM

Love the last line, reminiscent of Robert Frost's "the fog comes on little cat feet". Well done

Jan Allison

Date: 10/6/2014 12:15:00 PM

wonderful imagery Frederic:-) good luck in the contest:hugs jan xx