November

November, November, ember and go, From m life, Your chill clouds and rain, Are stuck in my heart, Forever. O November love burns In your embers.

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Vinay Thakur

Date: 4/13/2016 12:57:00 PM

Nice one friend...

Skat A

Date: 3/18/2016 11:56:00 PM

This is a wonderful poem, Laura, sweet November, NICE ~SKAT~

Anthony Mark

Date: 3/16/2016 3:09:00 AM

another disjointed abstract, that needs a million re reads to appreciate the lines created, the 3rd line floating " m " intentional or not, very unusual. from embers to chill and back to embers, i like this style , but do not know why ...? ...well done

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2016 10:06:00 PM

Hi Laura, Sweet November, ain't no other month like November. The colors and chills floating around. Nice little verse. a 7.... Luv ~LINA~