November

November, November,
ember and go,
From m life,
Your chill clouds and rain, 
Are stuck in my heart,
Forever.

O November
love burns
In your embers.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Thakur Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 12:57 PM
Nice one friend...
A  Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 11:56 PM
This is a wonderful poem, Laura, sweet November, NICE ~SKAT~
Mark Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 3:09 AM
another disjointed abstract, that needs a million re reads to appreciate the lines created, the 3rd line floating " m " intentional or not, very unusual. from embers to chill and back to embers, i like this style , but do not know why ...? ...well done
A   Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 10:06 PM
Hi Laura, Sweet November, ain't no other month like November. The colors and chills floating around. Nice little verse. a 7.... Luv ~LINA~
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