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November

tread on dry leaves slowly, softly,
in death they lie yellow, curly,
cold frosty mornings freeze their zeal,
yet they hold romantic appeal,
cast off from trees in late slumber,
Year in the month of November!

lonely hearts come, wander this way,
search memories of a lost day,
chorus of birds watch from the trees,
melody, harmony and peace,
park bench beseeches a brief stop,
seeking my warmth as more leaves drop!

night skies fill with fire display,
to mark misguided Guy Fawkes* day,
as I eye the winding path home,
end of my long nostalgic roam!
most await festive December,
but lonely hearts love November!

a lost hare gives me a quick look,
then scurries to a nearby brook,
across which nature paints a coat,
fallen leaves amidst lover’s boat,
beauty beckons where eye can see,
but heart desires you were with me!


3rd placement
Lay November poetry contest
William Kekaula sponsored
Written 7/11/2020
8 syllables each line (PS) 6 line stanzas
aabbcc rhyme, 4 stanzas total 192 syllables
* Guy Fawkes day, celebrates the gory killing of the man who opposed the King!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kendrick Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 10:05 AM
Excellent winner. Way to go..Congrats. Sara
Radhakrishna Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 10:44 AM
Thanks Sara! Appreciate your support!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 6:26 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Krish (forgive my misjudgment of the rules: 'aabbcc, aabbcc...' and not 'aabbcc, ddeeff...'), my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
Radhakrishna Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 11:16 PM
Thanks William! Aloha to you! I should have read the rules! dis not realise it was aabbcc all the way! Thanks for your consideration!:)
Jayasankar Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 8:43 AM
Very good portrayal of November ... Best wishes in the contest Krishji..~ Ani. :)
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 9:52 AM
Thanks Ani! Appreciate your support! :)
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