Nourishment

movement of each echo pummels ^ til outside the confines of self slits in sacred hallows sustain aromatic nectar holding true to life ~ where ~ sunsets drip her touch `a serene contentment lain on raised breaths vision's arisen ^ in fourths raining down an illuminate a speckle surrounding time gasping for precious air suspended stunning emotional radiance ~rests~ amidst red brushed rivers rushed eloquently floating by

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Akkina Downing

Date: 8/30/2017 9:51:00 AM

Artistically beautiful! You sure do have a way with words, Tim... hugs :)

Jean Murray

Date: 8/29/2017 6:32:00 AM

You have such a lovely way with words Tim, you often leave us gasping.

Sara Ella

Date: 8/28/2017 8:48:00 PM

Artfully beautiful Tim :) <3

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/28/2017 8:16:00 PM

Fancy Squiggles!!!! LOL Seriously, great write!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2017 5:47:00 PM

Fancy Schmancy, Tim!! My favorite part was red brushed rivers. So lovely.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2017 5:46:00 PM

Tim, I guess there is that Bridge of Madison County (was that the movie name?) but I don't think I ever saw it in person. Let me read your poem now.

Tim Smith
Date: 8/28/2017 5:59:00 PM

Yes that was it...Clint Eastwood movie set in Iowa

Darren White

Date: 8/28/2017 2:36:00 PM

hi :)

Tim Smith
Date: 8/28/2017 2:39:00 PM

Happy dance : )

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 8/28/2017 2:17:00 PM

Your lyrics always seem to lift me up on a cloud of feelings. This feels beautiful.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/28/2017 1:47:00 PM

I feel nourished by your lovely lines Tim I especially like the third stanza .. but read it as breasts on first reading lol - note to self to book eye test lol:-) hugs jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/28/2017 2:17:00 PM

Yes, Jan, book that eye test, by all means!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/28/2017 1:06:00 PM

Very poetic!

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/28/2017 1:01:00 PM

Oh like the Amidst red brushed rivers rushed eloquently floating by! Very nice Tim.