Nothingness

The dull clack of flip-flop slaps,
describes the taste of my water--
The smell of unscented candles,
like last night's forgotten dream--

Never cease my heart's percussion.


May 6, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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July 7, 2016 at 1:14 AM
Sam J, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Luv **SKAT**
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July 17, 2016 at 11:30 PM
Thank you, SKAT-- so very kind of you :)
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May 8, 2016 at 6:30 AM
This one caught my attention, for sure. Well done for your win, Sam.
Ward Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 2:48 PM
You're very welcome. :)
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May 9, 2016 at 10:03 AM
Thank you, Julia-- I'm very happy that this one was able to connect with your vision somewhat. I enjoyed the write...I look forward to competing in your future contests as well. Have a great day :)
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