Vladislav Raven Poet Rhyme

Nothingness

Just how I feel at this time.

Who better to teach of nothingness, than one who is nothing himself
A poet whose words are trivial, so worthless, they sit on the rubbish shelf
Nothingness for me is a gigantic black hole, from which I shall never climb
Nothing, I shall be forever, hidden away from all the sublime

At least I can read the sublime from others.

This matters not, only to myself really. I shall be back tomorrow, posting the next part of Alahsar. If it kills me, I shall see this piece to an end. Have a wonderful Friday and I wish you all well in your poetic endeavours. Hugs always....Mike. XX

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Darlene De Beaulieu April 7, 2020 at 12:27 PM Hello Mike,I like this poem it is different. I like different. I am making this my fav. I hope all is well with you. Stay safe. Enjoy your day my friend.

Pashang Salehi December 26, 2019 at 11:52 AM I'm sorry you feel that way, sometimes life is an illusion and we held together in the nothingness by time, but remember Mike this will pass too...

Richard Lamoureux December 8, 2019 at 10:41 AM I am sad that you are feeling this way. Sometimes the darkness lies to us. this would be one of those cases.

John Hamilton December 6, 2019 at 12:50 PM It's the time of the year, that's all, hope you get some sunshine, vitamin D pills help as well. Your poetry is fine and well, comments and views are down for all of us...don't worry, new year brings fresh energy to this site, happens every year. Take care Mike! Vladislav Raven December 6, 2019 at 5:31 PM Hi John, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this post, it is much appreciated. Well, I think it is time for me to give myself a swift kick and get back to being myself. It shall soon be January and I have to be on my next Valentine collection. Have a wonderful Saturday John. Your friend always....Mike.