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Nothing More Or Less

hid insecurities within ambiguous humor & convoluted whimsies, rules consistently changing in a game which required hardly more than breath, nothing less than obscurity twisting a fallible fancy, seizing day's intangibility

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Jannie Breedt

Date: 11/10/2016 1:31:00 PM

Wow. Being so in touch with your emotions is the key to unlocking other deep wells. Such keen observations and subtle nuances

Viv Wigley

Date: 11/9/2016 11:06:00 PM

A clever write, and very true, Paloma. Viv x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2016 5:50:00 PM

This is awesome. I love that last line, seizing day's intangibility!!

Chris Green

Date: 11/6/2016 7:24:00 AM

Many mask insecurities with humor or laughter, though most of the time there is nothing funny about what they are dealing with. Your poetry always brings a message, light or dark, wrapped in the most beautiful creative talent.

Darren White

Date: 11/6/2016 1:56:00 AM

Never lose your ambiguous humor, mo matter the circumstances.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/5/2016 2:10:00 PM

Very astute poem, Paloma. Keen observations. Most people don't consciously know that it is the intangible things that bond two people together. They may intuitively or subconsciously know this ... they just don't seize upon this truth when presented w/it. To keep it always in the forefront of their awareness, instead they tend to bury it in the back of their minds. Very enlightening poem, very much so. Love always. RW

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/5/2016 12:06:00 PM

Very good! I read this more than once.

Edward Mccall

Date: 11/5/2016 11:51:00 AM

I like the purity and the truth that is hidden inside. Very nice write. :)