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Nothing More In the Waters

You're gone, my love Carried by the current Slowly drifting, Until the extinction of the day. I could not see in the wave Any mark of your body, But just the clouds, embroidered with gold, In reflections, gliding on the deep water. Would you be a new Ophelia? From the mud would rise bubbles, Amount towards dusk, The distant shores of oblivion ... RC - octob 2015

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Date: 2/12/2017 8:11:00 PM
Rene, this is poem is so artistically expressive and beautiful! I would love to read the french version!
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Date: 11/29/2016 10:59:00 PM
terrific poem Rene...I know that feeling
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Rene Chabriere
Date: 11/30/2016 9:32:00 AM
Thanks Tim .. I expect my poem is "correct" for reading ( first wrote in french... )

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