Nothing Left

Our marriage is faltering There is no help from heaven above We've agreed to try to compromise Until there is no love I know you have a new love I can feel that it is true I need to learn not to care And not to be in love with you I hope you can be happy Even if it is not with me I will find some one too If that is what must be Now I will wish you well Though I am not sure why I will just close my door And have a final cry

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/28/2015 7:38:00 AM

- Sad when love dies - A touching and well written poem, "mom" - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mama Bear
Date: 2/28/2015 8:06:00 AM

Thank you my dear. I hope that you have a fantastic weekend as well. Hugs Edith

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/27/2015 3:34:00 PM

I'm sure this is true for many people, Mama Bear. Some can walk away, others stay because of obligations, and the very few....wish the other well. Lovely write.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/27/2015 3:44:00 PM

HAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!! Hmmmmmm....Never did go for blond. Will stick to black, thank you! XO

Mama Bear
Date: 2/27/2015 3:43:00 PM

No you are not meant to be a red head sorry Try blond!!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/27/2015 3:41:00 PM

SO true!!! No, I love my black hair...Played around with the settings a bit to give me a fiery look! ;) Like it? Hugs

Mama Bear
Date: 2/27/2015 3:38:00 PM

So now you are a red head!!!LOL Some people never have the nerve to walk away gracefully. We need to remember that we are the most important person in our lives and everyone will be happy if we are. Thanks for the visit Hugs Edith

Jan Allison

Date: 2/27/2015 1:18:00 PM

oh mama bear this is simply heartbreaking!:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/27/2015 1:49:00 PM

I know Mama bear I write a lot of fiction writes too - so lovely when people think it is real makes you feel you have done a credible poem:-) Hugs Jan xx

Mama Bear
Date: 2/27/2015 1:45:00 PM

That is OK it is not for real. It is just something that popped into my head. Happiness is my lifestyle right now Hugs Edith