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Nothing Left

Trying to move forward But I'm stuck in reverse So much pain (Remains) in my life Consuming me until There is nothing left But an empty shell That was once myself

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/18/2013 7:32:00 AM
Sad work..Filled with great emotion..Great work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 10/17/2013 3:32:00 PM
- When the bottom is reached ..... there is only one way ..... upward and forward. - Well written, Jan. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Jan Cannon
Date: 10/17/2013 4:12:00 PM
thank you for your comment - it means a lot I would like feedback on my poetry in general I feel like it is lacking but I don't know where

Book: Shattered Sighs