Nothing Left

Trying to move forward
But I'm stuck in reverse
So much pain
(Remains) in my life
Consuming me until
There is nothing left
But an empty shell
That was once myself
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 7:32 AM
Sad work..Filled with great emotion..Great work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Andresen Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 3:32 PM
- When the bottom is reached ..... there is only one way ..... upward and forward. - Well written, Jan. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Cannon Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 4:12 PM
thank you for your comment - it means a lot I would like feedback on my poetry in general I feel like it is lacking but I don't know where
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