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Nothing Lasts Forever

Her sensual walk can sway with a subtle movements art Her vision led me astray heated and blistered my heart Burning lips from hunger's abyss melts away love's vaporous form And expels each breathless kiss upon trembling skin so warm Tomorrow is a cold disguise worn by my lonely eyes 1/13/18 contest 10 Lines 5 Words Rhyme II

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Date: 1/20/2018 7:47:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win. Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 1/20/2018 5:28:00 PM
Very touching lines Frederic, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/20/2018 11:03:00 AM
so true, sometimes things don't last forever, great job dear Frederic, congrats and thank you! :)-luloo
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Date: 1/20/2018 10:30:00 AM
Superbly done, Frederic. Congrats on your fine win.
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Date: 1/20/2018 8:59:00 AM
Sad, but so beautifully expressed, Frederic. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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Date: 1/18/2018 4:40:00 PM
Wonderfully romantic and charming, Frederic, and I love the rhythm here - congratulations on your win, my good friend! :-)
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Date: 1/18/2018 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations, Frederic! ...Fran
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Date: 1/14/2018 12:40:00 PM
wow, this simmers with disarming lines, frederic... lovely poem!..huggs
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Date: 1/14/2018 11:43:00 AM
You did this channel very well... A deep emotive write..
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Date: 1/14/2018 8:31:00 AM
Very touching, Frederic. Lovely.
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Date: 1/13/2018 6:56:00 PM
I can feel the desire and loss leaping from the page! Nicely penned, Frederic! GL in the contest. :)
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Date: 1/13/2018 3:03:00 PM
So enduring , Frederic. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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