Frederic Parker Poet Rhyme

Nothing Lasts Forever

Her sensual walk can sway
with a subtle movements art
Her vision led me astray
heated and blistered my heart
Burning lips from hunger's abyss
melts away love's vaporous form
And expels each breathless kiss
upon trembling skin so warm
Tomorrow is a cold disguise
worn by my lonely eyes


1/13/18 contest 10 Lines 5 Words Rhyme II

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Eve Roper January 20, 2018 at 7:47 PM Back to congratulate you on your win. Hugs Eve~`*

Jan Allison January 20, 2018 at 5:28 PM Very touching lines Frederic, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars January 20, 2018 at 11:03 AM so true, sometimes things don't last forever, great job dear Frederic, congrats and thank you! :)-luloo

Line Gauthier January 20, 2018 at 10:30 AM Superbly done, Frederic. Congrats on your fine win.

Sandra Haight January 20, 2018 at 8:59 AM Sad, but so beautifully expressed, Frederic. Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Gregory Richard Barden January 18, 2018 at 4:40 PM Wonderfully romantic and charming, Frederic, and I love the rhythm here - congratulations on your win, my good friend! :-)

Francis J Grasso January 18, 2018 at 9:37 AM Congratulations, Frederic! ...Fran

Nette Onclaud January 14, 2018 at 12:40 PM wow, this simmers with disarming lines, frederic... lovely poem!..huggs

Silent One January 14, 2018 at 11:43 AM You did this channel very well... A deep emotive write..

Line Gauthier January 14, 2018 at 8:31 AM Very touching, Frederic. Lovely.

Laura Leiser January 13, 2018 at 6:56 PM I can feel the desire and loss leaping from the page! Nicely penned, Frederic! GL in the contest. :)

Eve Roper January 13, 2018 at 3:03 PM So enduring , Frederic. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*