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Nothing Is Forever

I thought we would last Forever But I don't know anything Anymore I don't know how to be Happy Our life is so beautifully Depressing Or is it depressingly Beautiful There is something so seriously Ironic You were so terribly Unhappy And you sought Another Now I am so seriously Unhappy Yet care to have no Other I want to inhale every piece of You I want to lay down inside of You Time and age can be so Cruel Yet it is Life That plays the biggest Tricks

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2014 8:28:00 AM

Jules,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Lyt El Deh

Date: 8/31/2014 4:59:00 PM

luvin it.

Secrets Inyoureyes

Date: 8/31/2014 10:12:00 AM

This is such an amazing,beautiful and expressive poem. I would love to read more of your poems. :) come check mine out btw

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/29/2014 11:55:00 PM

Wow - this is such a beautiful expressive write! Well done! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup - happy writings! Pandita

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/31/2014 10:13:00 AM

Pretty much what pandita said.

Skat A

Date: 8/29/2014 4:29:00 PM

Julia, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2014 3:43:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Julia - I choose your first great written poem -So true : "Nothing is forever" -Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)