Nothing Great Was Ever Achieved Without Enthusiasm

*title is Ralph Waldo Emerson quotation

       

Enthusiasm often is the reason
behind much-needed change and happiness.
Add zest to common sense and careful planning.
You hold the recipe to great success.

Though just the word “contagious” makes us fearful,
some things we spread are much to be desired.
Just think of how a smile and lively manner
spread through a crowd as others are inspired.

            ******************

The Bible speaks of our approach to living.
What gems of wisdom does the Word convey?
Do not be lacking in enthusiasm,
but serve the Lord with fervor* every day.

When Paul and Silas, jailed for their convictions, 
sang hymns at midnight, hearers found The Way.*
Good works and labor, do with verve and spirit
to please the Lord; that’s what some Scriptures say.*

  

 *Romans  12:11
   Acts 16  Jailor became believer, then family became believers.
		  The Way—Jesus
   Col. 3:23 and Ecc. 9:10, are examples.


June 17, 2020
entered Caren Krutsinger's contest, Write a Poem about Enthusiasm
       Placed 2nd

Date: October 20, 2020
Poetry Contest Title: Completely Your Choice (30) 
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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George   Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 5:23 AM
Yes! Enthusiasm is a very powerful thing. Many congrats on your fine win, Janice.
Mishra Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 8:48 AM
Powerful words Janice. Love the inspirational message. Congratulations on your win. Keep writing and inspiring :)
Canerdy Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 9:34 AM
Thank you so much, Aditi. Janice
Strand Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 3:35 AM
zest to common sense..so true Janice
Canerdy Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 6:24 AM
Thanks so much, Brian. Janice
Kannan Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 8:09 AM
Beautifully written, Janice... Good luck with the contest...
Canerdy Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 8:14 AM
Thanks so much, Supraja! Janice
Mcconnell Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 3:29 PM
Great penning Janice, really impressed with this one. lovely rhyme and flow for indeed what a world we would have without enthusiasm! Have a blessed one, Gordon
Canerdy Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 8:15 AM
Gordon, thank you for this wonderful comment. Janice
Pandit Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 7:16 AM
Your verses evoke enthusiasm, Janice--quite inspiring lines of faith--loved this line: add zest to common sense...
Canerdy Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 8:26 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Wolf Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 9:11 PM
The title sounded Ogden 'Nash-ish.' The write was anything but, thank G-d! Nice one, Janice! :) gw
Canerdy Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 9:24 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon. Janice
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