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Notes To Self On Poetry Writing

Hiya, Bin doodling some lines over the last few weeks, decided to post to see if anyone shares my way of thinking . Notes to Self on Poetry Writing On the beginning Is easy as the first line hit’s the page Then comes the falters of the language rage Inspired in a flash then blunts the brain That blots the copy, leaves a filthy stain How maddening, this crazy convolute Contrived to keep all fixed and absolute On the desire For drama free, add, ad nauseam No good was ever written by the glum Nor happy hearts whom on fair wind would sail Is needed more, to face uncertain gale The chopping of the heart, the soul left bare Live life and then return, with truth to share On content Oh yes be sure, unburden of that load That weighs so heavy going down life’s road Take care to leave no mystery unturned Written well, then pleasure you have earned Be Narcissus, Venus, maybe even Thor But for PS sake, never be a bore On ending Confetti words strewn like varnished rain Be set in place, the hordes to entertain By chance alone, one mortal you may reach That has not read a very similar speech Then as the final dash and dot, be penned Be wondering, do I write or I pretend On reviews Would Poe, his patience short, be long remain? No doubt, of me would slate and scream disdain Or Shakespeare, even in his lightest mood Describe my efforts as, criminally crude And Pope, be sitting there with shaking head His thought, I write this comment but with dread Hahaha, much like you are now I expect.

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Date: 4/22/2015 11:53:00 PM
A fascinating write, indeed. No one likes writing that is glum, Mr Seal....however, not to write of when life is glum is not to be true to self, is it not? You have many on site who write humorously. Much to keep you entertained, I'm sure. Fascinating write. It pains me to see Lucilla's post. Life is short.
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Date: 11/6/2013 8:55:00 AM
This was a good one. Sometimes I pretend to be happy when I'm blue, but sometimes life hits me and I write. I just hope I don't bore anyone with what I write. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Richard D Seal
Date: 11/7/2013 2:34:00 PM
Lol Lucy, You are never a bore my dear Lady, that was aimed directly at me haha, thanks for dropping by
Date: 11/1/2013 1:02:00 AM
Just read your reply on my comment. and now tis time for beddie bye!!! Hope you had a happy halloween!
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Richard D Seal
Date: 11/7/2013 2:33:00 PM
I not been about for a day or two, nice they are read thank you Petal
Date: 10/31/2013 4:16:00 PM
Hahaha, love your parting shot. Exactly the spot I'm at, bruv. Let's just say it's damned good. Thanks for the lesson, eloquent one. Licia :-)
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Richard D Seal
Date: 10/31/2013 7:51:00 PM
The less said about that spot the better Sis lol. I'll be over to get my next lesson in great writing from you again soon :):)
Date: 10/30/2013 9:59:00 PM
I like your humor, Richard. My favorite part: for PS sake, don't be a bore. Is PS short for Poetry Soup? That was great!
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Richard D Seal
Date: 10/31/2013 7:45:00 PM
Hiya Petal, Yes PS is short for Poetry Soup, you got that right, some say poetry is all about hidden messages haha
Date: 10/30/2013 4:41:00 AM
I adored this write Mr. Seal...I am touched by your work and have nothing but commendation for you on these thoughts on poetry. Thank you for sharing with us! Your devoted fan....Auntie....
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Richard D Seal
Date: 10/30/2013 8:17:00 PM
Awwww a fan, to which I return the compliment. Not to be too serious, I wrote this tongue in cheek, just to see if others had similar feelings, though originally it din't start out as a poem, just notes. Thanks for your supportive comment.

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