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Notes of Melody

notes of melody trail along sunlit garden... birds wake up flowers through dawn's gentle rise wings caress velvet tulips ... humming birth of leaves copyright . . . . . . . . . Richard Lamoureux's Beginnings Matter --- since i was in the thick of writing haiku and composing nature poems upon joining soup,i felt excited to share this piece.

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/6/2019 6:21:00 PM

What a wonderfully charming and beautiful write ... the hopes and joys of Spring, and the awakening of life ... just lovely! Thanks for sharing this gem - blessings! :-) <3

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 12:42:00 PM

Nette, Congratulations, on your fine win. <3 LINDA <3

Skat A

Date: 3/5/2015 10:19:00 PM

Nette, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Beginnings Matter Win ~SKAT~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/5/2015 2:52:00 AM

beautiful and as graceful as you NEtter ever.. :)! I will message you on phone.. :)! //olive eloisa

Mark Trichet

Date: 3/5/2015 12:39:00 AM

I'm forever in awe of your work Nette! This is no exception, it transforms the reader to another world.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/4/2015 2:44:00 PM

such beautiful haiku - amazing imagery Nette so good to catch up on these early poems:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 9/24/2014 5:08:00 PM

A joy to read the Princess's first poem, and lovely to read there's a rose in it, wow, James :)

Jake Ponce

Date: 5/7/2014 8:39:00 PM

Nette, you've come a looooong way since your first poem on the soup and I'm thrilled to be able to look back at your humble beginnings on the site. Great sharp first post. \m/

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/1/2014 3:00:00 AM

Subtle words, worth a win, Well said Nette !!

Frederic Parker

Date: 1/28/2014 10:06:00 PM

A very gentle poem, congrats on your win

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/28/2014 8:31:00 PM

Enjoyed your first write and congrats on the win, nette

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/28/2014 5:37:00 PM

nette, this is the kind of haiku I like to read, full of beautiful imagery, very lovely - congrats on your win in my contest! :)

Don Johnson

Date: 6/4/2011 4:16:00 AM

Nette, very good , thoughtful wood, moulded without fear, thankful am my dear. Don

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2011 6:45:00 PM

Nette, this is one awesome haiku. Congratulations on your big win in PD's contest!! Nice to see you at the top!

Jack Horne

Date: 6/3/2011 11:59:00 AM

Many congrats on all your wins, Nette : )

Gautami Phookan

Date: 6/3/2011 11:53:00 AM

Congrats nette on your wonderful win with these beautiful haikus from the early entries on soup..love, gautami

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/3/2011 10:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Nette. Love, Carol

Joseph Osita

Date: 6/3/2011 10:51:00 AM

Congrats on your meritorious 2nd place win with this amazing haiku.You are always a winner**huggs**

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/3/2011 10:35:00 AM

Reflecting over the sounds of evening's hour and the accompanying aromas....the chrome dew of bamboo skin is fresh...I can even hear the bullfrogs amidst a marsh. Relaxing moments here...... Thanks, Nette, and congrats to U. Ps. Done with the booook. Yahooooooo! Too much to digest now. Will need antacid. ha ha. Gwendolen

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/3/2011 10:10:00 AM

My congratulations on the second place win in the contest, nette