Nette Onclaud Poet Haiku

Notes of Melody

notes of melody
trail along sunlit garden...
birds wake up flowers

through dawn's gentle rise
wings caress velvet tulips ...
humming birth of leaves


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Richard Lamoureux's Beginnings Matter

--- since i was in the thick of writing haiku 
and composing nature poems upon
joining soup,i felt excited to share this piece.

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Gregory Richard Barden January 6, 2019 at 6:21 PM What a wonderfully charming and beautiful write ... the hopes and joys of Spring, and the awakening of life ... just lovely! Thanks for sharing this gem - blessings! :-) <3

Poet Destroyer A March 8, 2015 at 12:42 PM Nette, Congratulations, on your fine win. <3 LINDA <3

Skat A March 5, 2015 at 10:19 PM Nette, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Beginnings Matter Win ~SKAT~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 5, 2015 at 2:52 AM beautiful and as graceful as you NEtter ever.. :)! I will message you on phone.. :)! //olive eloisa

Mark Trichet March 5, 2015 at 12:39 AM I'm forever in awe of your work Nette! This is no exception, it transforms the reader to another world.

Jan Allison March 4, 2015 at 2:44 PM such beautiful haiku - amazing imagery Nette so good to catch up on these early poems:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser September 24, 2014 at 5:08 PM A joy to read the Princess's first poem, and lovely to read there's a rose in it, wow, James :)

Jake Ponce May 7, 2014 at 8:39 PM Nette, you've come a looooong way since your first poem on the soup and I'm thrilled to be able to look back at your humble beginnings on the site. Great sharp first post. \m/

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 1, 2014 at 3:00 AM Subtle words, worth a win, Well said Nette !!

Frederic Parker January 28, 2014 at 10:06 PM A very gentle poem, congrats on your win

Dr.Ram Mehta January 28, 2014 at 8:31 PM Enjoyed your first write and congrats on the win, nette

Charlotte Puddifoot January 28, 2014 at 5:37 PM nette, this is the kind of haiku I like to read, full of beautiful imagery, very lovely - congrats on your win in my contest! :)

Don Johnson June 4, 2011 at 4:16 AM Nette, very good , thoughtful wood, moulded without fear, thankful am my dear. Don

Andrea Dietrich June 3, 2011 at 6:45 PM Nette, this is one awesome haiku. Congratulations on your big win in PD's contest!! Nice to see you at the top!

Jack Horne June 3, 2011 at 11:59 AM Many congrats on all your wins, Nette : )

Gautami Phookan June 3, 2011 at 11:53 AM Congrats nette on your wonderful win with these beautiful haikus from the early entries on soup..love, gautami

Carol Sunshine Brown June 3, 2011 at 10:52 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Nette. Love, Carol

Joseph Osita June 3, 2011 at 10:51 AM Congrats on your meritorious 2nd place win with this amazing haiku.You are always a winner**huggs**

Gwendolen Song June 3, 2011 at 10:35 AM Reflecting over the sounds of evening's hour and the accompanying aromas....the chrome dew of bamboo skin is fresh...I can even hear the bullfrogs amidst a marsh. Relaxing moments here...... Thanks, Nette, and congrats to U. Ps. Done with the booook. Yahooooooo! Too much to digest now. Will need antacid. ha ha. Gwendolen

Dr.Ram Mehta June 3, 2011 at 10:10 AM My congratulations on the second place win in the contest, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 3, 2011 at 9:21 AM Congrats Nette on another marvelous win my friend.. a great poem for first one luv..

Poet Destroyer A June 3, 2011 at 8:16 AM Nette, a super congratulations on your second place... take care,..p.d.

Skat A June 3, 2011 at 7:07 AM congrats on your excellent entry into the contest Luv*Skat

Wilma Neels April 11, 2011 at 4:52 AM A real beauty Nette, awesome image, enjoyed it this afternoon *hugs* Wilma

Kash Poet February 3, 2011 at 11:47 AM wonderful picture of morning you have painted here!!--kashinath

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