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Note To Soul

hush, be still my soul listen to God's breath, whispers close your eyes, just feel **Aug. 3, 2010 written for Rick's Silence is Golden contest :)

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De R

Date: 8/25/2011 7:14:00 AM

This seems similar to the 'God's Lullaby' poem. I think I like this one better. ;)

Skat A

Date: 9/20/2010 1:23:00 PM

I ALREADY COMMENT THIS POEM, IT MAKES ONE SMILE TO YOUR THOUGHTS*luv~SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2010 7:01:00 PM

Nikko, I can read this one over and over! Really I love the whole silence here. wow! to here God is a delight , even if it is just thru soul,..p.d. ;D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2010 7:07:00 PM

Back over to this lovely one. Nikko, I couldn't fit it into the stanza, but I fell by running into the side of our coffee table. It missed by eye by a fraction of an inch and I still have a scar on the side of my eye. I truly believe my neck got messed up in my childhood and now the doc says I have a damn 75 year old neck! some days the arthritis kills! LUv, Andrea

Kim Hilliker

Date: 8/14/2010 10:38:00 AM

Compelling Haiku. Just feel is a perfect ending.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2010 6:56:00 AM

Congratulations Nikko on your win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Silence Is Golden". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2010 9:53:00 PM

Congratulations, NIkko, and did I thank you for my win in your recent contest. I am so forgetful. Luv, Andrea

Skat A

Date: 8/7/2010 1:18:00 PM

Nikko:) I am enjoying God's fresh air*luv~SKAT

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/6/2010 7:44:00 AM

gorgeous entry, congrats on your win

Steven Mossburg

Date: 8/5/2010 7:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I can feel the silence and the peace. I love the line "listen to God's breath"

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/5/2010 5:01:00 PM

Congrats on this well deserved win, Nikko

James Fraser

Date: 8/5/2010 2:39:00 PM

Many congratulations Nikko on your win in Rick's fine contest with this Gem >> James

Timothy Brumley

Date: 8/5/2010 2:35:00 PM

Congrats Nikko on your win!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/5/2010 1:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win Nikko! Your senryu/haiku is just beautiful. Your imagery is so inspiring and serene. Blessings, Connie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/5/2010 11:41:00 AM

Congrats Nikko on your winning poem in Rick's contest with these wonderful words of Haiku.. very expressive and most creative my sweet friend.. enjoy another victorious moment..with luv..

Kris Walters

Date: 8/5/2010 6:07:00 AM

Very gently done, Nikko. Beautiful! Kris

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/5/2010 4:06:00 AM

Sweet and awesome Haiku, Nikko! Umaasa ako ikaw ay mabuti. Ako paggawa ng isang maliit na mas mahusay na ngayon! All the best end enjoy the rest of this week!....Gert:)

Lynette Chachere

Date: 8/4/2010 11:58:00 PM

petite, & very sweet the feel of those whispers must be.sleep tight, Nikko.don't let the bed bugs bite.lol ~Always&Forever Lynette

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/4/2010 9:36:00 PM

The silence is awesome Nikko, enjoyed the freshness of your poem,..p..d

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2010 6:05:00 PM

HI, Nikko. you did very well with your haiku and your hush word. A more spiritual write than mine. (giggles) Luv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/4/2010 11:39:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Nikko. Please continue you keep your pen flowing. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/4/2010 4:42:00 AM

I need to read this later, when I am in a relaxed mode hehe.. Hey sleeping beauty, hope your Wednesday has been great so far :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/4/2010 2:12:00 AM

awesome poem this , just love it. Harry

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/3/2010 7:05:00 PM

A wonderful entry to the contest, Nikko. Good luck in the contest

Linda Milgate

Date: 8/3/2010 12:51:00 PM

Interesting how you read your poem and feel the stillness. Good luck in contest.