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Note To Soul

hush, be still my soul
listen to God's breath, whispers
close your eyes, just feel



**Aug. 3, 2010 written for Rick's Silence is Golden contest :)

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De R

August 25, 2011 at 7:14 AM

This seems similar to the 'God's Lullaby' poem. I think I like this one better. ;)

Skat A

September 20, 2010 at 1:23 PM

I ALREADY COMMENT THIS POEM, IT MAKES ONE SMILE TO YOUR THOUGHTS*luv~SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

September 1, 2010 at 7:01 PM

Nikko, I can read this one over and over! Really I love the whole silence here. wow! to here God is a delight , even if it is just thru soul,..p.d. ;D

Andrea Dietrich

August 17, 2010 at 7:07 PM

Back over to this lovely one. Nikko, I couldn't fit it into the stanza, but I fell by running into the side of our coffee table. It missed by eye by a fraction of an inch and I still have a scar on the side of my eye. I truly believe my neck got messed up in my childhood and now the doc says I have a damn 75 year old neck! some days the arthritis kills! LUv, Andrea

Kim Hilliker

August 14, 2010 at 10:38 AM

Compelling Haiku. Just feel is a perfect ending.

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 9, 2010 at 6:56 AM

Congratulations Nikko on your win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Silence Is Golden". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

August 7, 2010 at 9:53 PM

Congratulations, NIkko, and did I thank you for my win in your recent contest. I am so forgetful. Luv, Andrea

Skat A

August 7, 2010 at 1:18 PM

Nikko:) I am enjoying God's fresh air*luv~SKAT

Francine Roberts

August 6, 2010 at 7:44 AM

gorgeous entry, congrats on your win

Steven Mossburg

August 5, 2010 at 7:29 PM

Congratulations on your win. I can feel the silence and the peace. I love the line "listen to God's breath"

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 5, 2010 at 5:01 PM

Congrats on this well deserved win, Nikko

James Fraser

August 5, 2010 at 2:39 PM

Many congratulations Nikko on your win in Rick's fine contest with this Gem >> James

Timothy Brumley

August 5, 2010 at 2:35 PM

Congrats Nikko on your win!

Connie Marcum Wong

August 5, 2010 at 1:12 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win Nikko! Your senryu/haiku is just beautiful. Your imagery is so inspiring and serene. Blessings, Connie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 5, 2010 at 11:41 AM

Congrats Nikko on your winning poem in Rick's contest with these wonderful words of Haiku.. very expressive and most creative my sweet friend.. enjoy another victorious moment..with luv..

Kris Walters

August 5, 2010 at 6:07 AM

Very gently done, Nikko. Beautiful! Kris

Gert W. Knop

August 5, 2010 at 4:06 AM

Sweet and awesome Haiku, Nikko! Umaasa ako ikaw ay mabuti. Ako paggawa ng isang maliit na mas mahusay na ngayon! All the best end enjoy the rest of this week!....Gert:)