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single segment red ribbon round scented red velvet rose. " Do love me for who I am, lull my hush sorrow." 10/18/2023

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Silent One

Date: 10/24/2023 1:02:00 PM

You did this one very well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2023 6:08:00 AM

A cry…a yearning…Congratulations!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/24/2023 4:34:00 AM

Dear eve, I love this very sincere and heartfelt write that expresses longing and such soulful thoughts in a very creative manner. Oh to be loved for all that we are, we all desire. And you’ve written about that so very well in a moving manner. I especially love the alliterations too. Thank you for writing. Congratulations on winning

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/20/2023 9:02:00 AM

Ahh!! Such a nice sentimental one with a touch of sorrow. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/19/2023 7:36:00 PM

Dear Eve, your poem is truly exceptional. It possesses a delicate yet profound quality that appears to be imploring, "Do love me for who I am " This sentiment resonates deeply within us all, as we yearn for and genuinely require unconditional love. Your skillful execution of this Dudoitsu is truly commendable.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 10/19/2023 6:48:00 PM

Whoa, Eve! So short, so heart exploding! The. Single. Velvet rose, single segment ribbon. Simple statement (same one we own fewer than God actually will enact… & the last 5 syllables holding the sad wish of most of humanity all the way back to Adam & Eve. hmmm. Concise. Touching. & we wonder…also tragic? Or will there be acceptance? Yikes! Magnificent!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/19/2023 1:28:00 PM

a gentle yet powerful poem that seems to be pleading...'love me for who I am' I think we all want and actually need that. Nicely done Dudo Itsu...enjoy your evening, Sara

Eve Roper
Date: 10/19/2023 5:43:00 PM