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single segment red ribbon
round scented red velvet rose.
" Do love me for who I am,
lull my hush sorrow."

10/18/2023

dreamlove hurtsdodoitsu

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Silent One

October 24, 2023 at 1:02 PM

You did this one very well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Kim Rodrigues

October 24, 2023 at 6:08 AM

A cry…a yearning…Congratulations!

Ink Empress

October 24, 2023 at 4:34 AM

Dear eve, I love this very sincere and heartfelt write that expresses longing and such soulful thoughts in a very creative manner. Oh to be loved for all that we are, we all desire. And you’ve written about that so very well in a moving manner. I especially love the alliterations too. Thank you for writing. Congratulations on winning

Sara Kendrick

October 20, 2023 at 9:02 AM

Ahh!! Such a nice sentimental one with a touch of sorrow. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara

Sotto Poet

October 19, 2023 at 7:36 PM

Dear Eve, your poem is truly exceptional. It possesses a delicate yet profound quality that appears to be imploring, "Do love me for who I am " This sentiment resonates deeply within us all, as we yearn for and genuinely require unconditional love. Your skillful execution of this Dudoitsu is truly commendable.

Sally Eslinger

October 19, 2023 at 6:48 PM

Whoa, Eve! So short, so heart exploding! The. Single. Velvet rose, single segment ribbon. Simple statement (same one we own fewer than God actually will enact… & the last 5 syllables holding the sad wish of most of humanity all the way back to Adam & Eve. hmmm. Concise. Touching. & we wonder…also tragic? Or will there be acceptance? Yikes! Magnificent!