Not Yet Roses

My core being is tired
Drained, exhausted
Where can I rest?
Recharge, sleep
Inject my vitamin
Warmth, revitalized
A burst of soulful sun
Inside, passion
A sense of well being?
Is there any truth to that?
Mother will I be ok?
In my darkness I try not to rot
Maybe a new friend
Affection, sweetness
Can I hold you?
A movie, a ride
Flowers yes not yet roses
Sorry tulips first
A kiss
Gentle dance 
Under a quilt
A smile
Explore, search for oblivion
Alone early sunday morning
Let's move 
Leave Colorado
How about Vegas?
Big dreams, grand hopes
Girls dance on tightropes
I want
I want to drive
Rent a small place
Black curtains
A television, radio, typewriter
Write a novel together
Soak our brains
In a creative frontier
Rich dynamic climax
With out a plot!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Puddifoot Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 5:08 AM
sounds interesting...very good poem
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November 18, 2010 at 9:00 PM
Welcome to the soup Adam. We all strive for success and some do. I wish you all the best. if you have any questions. just ask away and we will help you
Chappell Avatar
November 18, 2010 at 6:05 PM
welcome to the soup my freind your poem is wonderful so well penned my freind
Shango Avatar
November 18, 2010 at 4:32 PM
Welcome to poetry soup, you write like an artist, friend. Peace and love.
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November 18, 2010 at 2:56 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with its creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be special and fun.. any help needed just ask anyone... check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv..
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