Abdul Malik Mandani Poet Free verse

Not Yet

I had a long day
and I carried the world
upon my shoulder,
The journey was long 
lonely and arduous,
I want to lie down
and close my eyes ...
But not yet.

The sun is setting gently
and a weary wind sighs
through the evening haze,
I want to lay my burden down
and quietly sneak away
from the din of the day ...
But not yet.

I had my days in the sun
I frolicked and I had fun,
It's time to retreat
to my safe haven
and reminisce about
those willful days,
I am ready to confess
and mend my ways ...
But not just yet!

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Poet Destroyer A July 14, 2013 at 12:25 AM Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA

David William Breidenthal July 9, 2013 at 7:53 PM We have those hardworking days...Abdul. I loved this poem oh so much. I'm adding this to my fav's list and you are one of my fav poet. Love the cleverness and the emotions that spills out of this heartfelt write. Wonderful job, dear poet. :) I hope you have a good, refreshing summer and "having fun frolicking in the sun!" Have yourself a good week as well. Goodbye for now and I'll read your poems soon. *waves* ~DWB Abdul Malik Mandani July 12, 2013 at 3:17 PM Thanks a lot. This also is my favorite. It speaks from my heart.

Abdul Malik Mandani July 9, 2013 at 2:59 PM Thanks for your generous comment. I am world-weary but doesn't seem to just let go... Not yet, anyway!!

Alexander Schwartz July 9, 2013 at 2:45 PM This paints a beautiful picture with soft, colorful imagery. You seem to have a very classic style that I find comforting and inspiring. Perhaps this piece portrays mixed feelings. I sense both comfort, relief, and sadness. Thank you so much for sharing.

Poet Destroyer A June 6, 2013 at 10:16 PM Abdul, thank you for supporting my contest... Congratulations! love~ Linda