Not With You

I’m going to pack
And run away
I’m not coming back
Not for a few days
I don’t need you 
I already know what to do 
I’m better off without some one
You know I’m right
I don’t know why you always put up a fight
To get with me
It not going to be
No not like that
When it’s all said and done 
You know I’ll be the one 
That you will need 
Because you can’t succeed
No not on your own
But it’s too late now
You are on you own
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 4, 2010 at 9:18 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup MaryAnn. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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February 4, 2010 at 9:02 AM
I was told something like this very recently, and this writing mirrors it...TAH
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