Not Winning

I hate to clean the bathroom floor...
my thinning hair is there - much more!


For "Couplet Challenge" sponsored by Susan Burch.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 10:30 AM
I comes as a shock doesn't it? Too bad there isn't fertilizer for the problem. You do such great things with so few words George!
Devonshire Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 12:42 PM
LOL We both wrote about the bathroom floor, but I love your take with the "thinning hair," George. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 10:20 AM
Good morning and congratulations on your win in Susan's "Couplet Challenge" contest George. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 11:04 PM
WAY to GO, George. Congrats on your win.
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 5:02 PM
Funny one George! Congrats. to you :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 10:10 PM
hahaha, this one is a riot, George!!! Happy birthday to ya soon!!!
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