Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Not Winning

by Michael J Falotico


                                                I wish I could hold forgiveness in my hand,
                                               and sprinkle it over lives like grains of sand.
                                                   Maybe some may reach a certain few.
                                                 So then they might know that I hurt too.
                                          Guilt and anger drain our soul for new beginnings.
                                   Regardless of what "Charlie Sheen" says we're not winning.
                                                              Only covering sinning..

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Carol Sunshine Brown April 6, 2011 at 4:54 AM It has been a pleasure to read your poetry today Michael. I hope to get back soon to read more of your poetry. May you always find inspiration to carry on with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels April 6, 2011 at 12:45 AM Sometimes we try and mask it that's why it doesn't come out quite as clearly. I struggle with that too. Okay that's just my two cents again.. I love this reflective write of yours Michael, enjoy the day ahead :) love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 5, 2011 at 5:00 PM Powerful and profound my White Knight.. an awesome and amazing write to bring reality to the forefront of life in your lines..luv.. wonderful reflective words Michael.. luv it .. Jersey Girl in amazed mode by her White Knight..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire April 5, 2011 at 3:53 PM You are far more intelligent than Charlie Sheen, Michael. He thinks he can cover his sins. People like you wish only for forgiveness to begin life again on a better footing. Very profound, my friend! Love, Carolyn

Shani Fassbender April 5, 2011 at 2:40 PM Anger and not forgiving take up so much of our energy....it is so much easier to be open minded, tolerant, and forgiving...

Michael J. Falotico April 5, 2011 at 2:32 PM Sometimes I wish I could speak as well as I could write.. never really comes out the same when read with ears not eyes... Just my thoughts...