Not That It Matters

I built my pillars
My foundations, in sand
Thusly, my confidence suffered
Anon-and-gone, I struggled to fill the boxes

Those blank cubes on the checklist of your needs
Oh, I did it, eventually, only to hear your recreant farewell
I once thought I was not worthy of your love
For I am a bumbling fool at so many things in life

Wearing my heart for all to see, (and make assumptions of)
But I am sure to my marrow and coursings
That NO ONE else can EVER love you as completely as I do
As deeply as I do, and as unfailingly true as I do

That is the ONLY thing that can make ANYone
Worthy of your love ...
And deserving of your intents
I didn't see that ... then

YOU didn't see it, and you can't see it now
THAT is what makes you
Unworthy of ME ...
But thanks.




~ 1st Place ~  in the "Standard Contest 170 Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 2/5/2019 9:05:00 AM
It is a profound insight to realize that love not returned is a loss not to the giver but to the intended...congrats on your win, Greg (p.s. as a young man I had my heart broken by my former fiance, and it only took me a year to get over it.)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/2/2019 6:17:00 PM
Indeed, that is well-said, my friend, and so true ... many kind thanks, LJ, I'm so pleased you could relate. Blessings! :-)
Date: 2/3/2019 8:50:00 PM
Meat and potatoes..How lovely and intimate. This what poetry should sound like , it connects.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/2/2019 6:15:00 PM
Very kind of you, Jannie, blessings my good friend - I pray you are well. I am always so happy to see you "about"! :-D
Date: 2/3/2019 5:23:00 AM
Greg, congrats on your win for this very emotive verse. I could feel the emotions of the unrequited love. John
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/2/2019 6:15:00 PM
Thank you so very much, John, best wishes! :-)
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