Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

"not That Easy"

You let me fall like a raindrop on the floor...
Just mixed in a storm and left to be no more...
I'm just another drop from a cloud of rain...
But you know deep inside I don't taste the same...
Left on the walkway to just dry up and go away...
But that's just not me, I'll splitter splatter my own way...
Life goes on and more clouds shall come and go...
But this little raindrop has a lot more to show...



The "Blink Contest" by John Heck

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Poet Destroyer A September 23, 2010 at 5:16 PM Michael, a sad wasteful feeling. A hard motion in life when one does not mean to hurt the one they love. It's harder when the one you love drops you with the tears. When they have no more to shed, as life passes by one will never forget. Or should I say one will never let the other forget. You know rain speaks louder than the ground..Enjoyed your poem, have a nice one,..p.d.

Wilma Neels September 23, 2010 at 7:12 AM This little raindrop has got a fighting spirit. I love the message you convey in your write, getting back up after adversity stronger and wiser.. Brilliant Mr. F, love Wilma

Constance La France September 22, 2010 at 6:55 PM Thanks for commenting on my poetry ~ Your poem speaks of so much sadness and of so much courage ~ I know how that little raindrop feels~ inspiring write~~

Caroline Cécile Delacroix September 22, 2010 at 3:54 PM I really like the spirit in this write. Often when people led you down, it is as if they expect you to be down. Gives them a feeling of power or something. It is sad though because this kind of experience does alter our faith in people somewhat. And yet, you are right. You won't be anyone's victim and indeed you rise again. Great write! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my latest. Best to you, Caroline.

Deb Wilson September 22, 2010 at 2:50 PM love the confidence and hope at the conclusion..really nice poem Michael..take care~Deb

Carolyn Devonshire September 22, 2010 at 2:49 PM I hope you're entering this one in John Heck's "Blink" contest. It approaches the feeling of loneliness in a very creative way with the visual imagery, Michael. Glad you can still muster the enthusiasm to go on after the clouds pass overhead. Love, Carolyn

Chuck Keys September 22, 2010 at 2:32 PM message well received - and expressed nicely. thank you, chuck

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 22, 2010 at 2:31 PM Wonderfully romantic with a twist of confidence too.. your words always excite me and my creative juices begin to flow... think "Steamy" came from a read of your yesterday luv... plus my own "steamy" situation..hahaha. enjoyed with luv.. your Jersey Girl...

Sara Kendrick September 22, 2010 at 2:14 PM Enjoyed reading this one..The comparison to raindrops added interest. Reads as if the one who was hurt has a great deal of spunk and will spring back and keep on going...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I was delighted at your encouraging comments..Sara