Not Sofa King Cool

A College Dorm sleeps Four per room Keg party Loud Too much Boom A Drunk freshman sleeps Where he falls Coeds toss him on The sofa Instead of snooze in the halls A Sorority girl Named him “Sofa King Tool” Now he feels like a Fool Not Sofa King Cool

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2011 11:20:00 PM

rereading this cute one. How are ya? I'm going off now and just thought I 'd say hi, and bye!

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 6/19/2011 10:47:00 AM

This poem is Sofa King Cool. Nice one, JS. :))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2011 5:43:00 PM

this one definitely rhyme because it is going with a regular beat. I really like this one, Joey. Are you a college student. Things sure different at today's colleges from when I was in college. But then again, BYU has always been and will always be a school that doesn't allow co-ed rooms. haha.

James Foulk

Date: 6/11/2011 8:11:00 PM

enjoyed reading this sounds like what i have heard about College partys. thank you for reading and commentint on Heavens Delight, well here at soup we try to support one another and lift each other up.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/30/2011 6:56:00 AM

funny one Joseph. I never went to college but it sounds alot like the one my brother went to! Well done

Anne Rutherford

Date: 5/29/2011 5:14:00 AM

Joseph , sounds like you know what your talking about. Good one!! anne

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 5/28/2011 9:22:00 AM

Do you have experienced this?Sounds like it.Good stuff again.Catch ya later...Kacey

John Aaron Green

Date: 5/28/2011 8:35:00 AM

i lived this,,,,lol,,thanks for the inspiring reviews, your poetry is unique, and is a wonderful read,,,and i am not young at all, just young inside,,but i will take your words, and dig deeper and see what i can come up with.......

Rockman Pritts

Date: 5/28/2011 8:24:00 AM

Good one JL. I never went to college but it reminds me of my days in the Army when I lived in the barracks.