Jslambert Mister Roboto Poet Rhyme

Not Sofa King Cool

A
College Dorm sleeps
Four per room
Keg party 
Loud
Too much Boom

           A
Drunk freshman sleeps
Where he falls
Coeds toss him on 
The sofa 
Instead of snooze in
the halls

            A 
Sorority girl 
Named him  
“Sofa King Tool”
Now he feels like a Fool
Not Sofa King Cool

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Andrea Dietrich November 17, 2011 at 11:20 PM rereading this cute one. How are ya? I'm going off now and just thought I 'd say hi, and bye!

Delysia Hendricks June 19, 2011 at 10:47 AM This poem is Sofa King Cool. Nice one, JS. :))

Andrea Dietrich June 18, 2011 at 5:43 PM this one definitely rhyme because it is going with a regular beat. I really like this one, Joey. Are you a college student. Things sure different at today's colleges from when I was in college. But then again, BYU has always been and will always be a school that doesn't allow co-ed rooms. haha.

James Foulk June 11, 2011 at 8:11 PM enjoyed reading this sounds like what i have heard about College partys. thank you for reading and commentint on Heavens Delight, well here at soup we try to support one another and lift each other up.

Robert A. Dufresne May 30, 2011 at 6:56 AM funny one Joseph. I never went to college but it sounds alot like the one my brother went to! Well done

Anne Rutherford May 29, 2011 at 5:14 AM Joseph , sounds like you know what your talking about. Good one!! anne

Kacey Greenlee May 28, 2011 at 9:22 AM Do you have experienced this?Sounds like it.Good stuff again.Catch ya later...Kacey

John Aaron Green May 28, 2011 at 8:35 AM i lived this,,,,lol,,thanks for the inspiring reviews, your poetry is unique, and is a wonderful read,,,and i am not young at all, just young inside,,but i will take your words, and dig deeper and see what i can come up with.......

Rockman Pritts May 28, 2011 at 8:24 AM Good one JL. I never went to college but it reminds me of my days in the Army when I lived in the barracks.