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Not So Perfect

Here she comes, walking with pride. Her face is so vibrant, she looks so alive. Nothing can stop her, no one dares to try. Her entire life is corroded with deals, tricks, and lies. Her beauty is everything, her smile kills all It brings down the strongest men, makes the highest building fall. But when she comes home, The story does change. Her life’s not so perfect, The positions rearrange. Her father's an alcoholic, and not very nice. She has a brother who gave up on school, and can’t read or write Of all of her family, her mother is the worse. Sometimes she wonders if she'll survive this curse. He mother yells,and tells her that she's no good. She would give it all up, if only she could. At the end of the night she goes into her room, She begins to weep, and eventually cries herself to sleep. She wakes up the next day, Puts on a happy face, And goes to school as if nothing happened the previous night, Or that absolutely nothing is wrong with her life. So now that you’ve seen what’s behind the closed door, I hoped you’ve thought about this girl a little more. With the utmost respect, I present to you, the life of someone "perfect".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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