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Not So Nice To Meet You

She floated to me, just as the moon rose. A transparent wonder sending shivers through my veins. Albeit a warm summers eve, icy chills flood me - freeze me. This sight, it consumes me with fright. Meanwhile, just after the stars had shown their face, I saw her face too. Translucent and calm in wispy form. Reaching a glass hand to my white fingers. Darkness has cloaked the night. And immediately upon this late hour, she disappeared as if being Summoned. Whereas, the blood in my body ran cold for some time For the contest : 'when' Honorable Mention

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Date: 5/5/2011 6:42:00 AM
Excellent write, thankfully it's not night here as I read it...S C A R Y! :) Congrats Emma on your win. Enjoyed this thoroughly..love, gautami
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Date: 5/4/2011 2:09:00 PM
Congrats Emma on such a good write!!!! and a fine win!!
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Date: 5/3/2011 8:43:00 AM
Congrats on your HM, Emma. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/3/2011 4:39:00 AM
Congrats Emma on your HM in Paula's contest with this fantastic write luv.. let us enjoy our HM's together for excellence ...
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Date: 5/3/2011 3:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Emma in Paula's "When" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2011 11:17:00 PM
What a very intriguing and haunting write! Love how you did yours! Congrats on being in the winners' list Emma :)
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Date: 5/2/2011 9:49:00 PM
ooooh, hauntingly good!! congratulations.
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Date: 5/2/2011 11:53:00 AM
I kept waiting for you to tell us who you were talking about. I'm glad you did'nt. It leaves the ghost up to us. The evening hours do bring the creeps that never show their face. The moonlight shines in all it's splender, but does'nt leave a trace.
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Date: 5/1/2011 5:57:00 AM
Very very wonderful imagery that conveys the deeper thoughts, Emma
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Date: 4/30/2011 1:09:00 PM
A spooky write! Interesting read.
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