Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

Not So Innocent Jack and Jill

Young Jack and Jill went up the hill
To fetch a pail of water
Jack put his arms around her waist
And they did something they shouldn’t ought’a

Soon she was spreading around her girth
Nine months later she gave birth …
Doing something they shouldn’t ought’a
Gave them a baby daughter!

4th December 2015

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Lindsay Laurie December 7, 2015 at 8:02 PM G'day Jan... now you have really turned this into a 'nursery' rhyme Jan. Thanks for the chuckle - Lindsay Jan Allison December 8, 2015 at 1:48 AM ha ha ha love it Lindsay:-) hugs Jan xx

Pete Yuhas December 7, 2015 at 4:36 PM Now that's funny! Jan Allison December 7, 2015 at 4:37 PM Thanks Pete I do try and write with humour whenever possible:-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Rigoler December 5, 2015 at 3:11 PM I've always was puzzled by this little poem. Well, you've cracked it open for me! Delightful, Jan. Thanks for reading Hi ho, Hi ho. The holiday season is the only one that most christians blind themselves to the greed and tacky commercialism of xmas. / M Jan Allison December 5, 2015 at 3:15 PM LOL Maurice i just did my own take on the rhyme .. but maybe this was the real reason they went up the hill lol - I don't bow to commercialism - sadly the real reason for celebrating Christmas is lost in the wrapping paper and boxes!:-( hugs jan

Arthur Vaso December 5, 2015 at 11:22 AM Hilarious Jan!!! LOL :) Jan Allison December 5, 2015 at 11:23 AM Thanks my friend I was beginning to doubt myself lol:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus December 5, 2015 at 8:57 AM So that's what was meant when it was written that they took a tumble!! Innocent me...I never caught on to it:) Hugs // paul Jan Allison December 5, 2015 at 9:26 AM LOL Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Jill Spagnola December 4, 2015 at 5:12 PM A definate 7 Jan! smiley face, jill Jan Allison December 4, 2015 at 5:26 PM Thanks Jill I have posted another poem called girls and boys come out to play :-) hugs jan xx

CayCay Godwin December 4, 2015 at 3:48 PM Oh, Jack and Jill and that darned hill - I bet they even left the water! Very cute and amusing - I enjoyed it ... CayCay Jan Allison December 4, 2015 at 3:50 PM LOL maybe she should have poured it over him and cooled his ardour:-) hugs Jan xx

Keith Bickerstaffe December 4, 2015 at 3:01 PM I LOVE IT! Thanks for nudging me in this direction. A beautifully crafted piece of naughtiness!!! Well done Jan! Best wishes, Keith Keith Bickerstaffe December 4, 2015 at 5:31 PM I see that now... I was a little ahead of myself and should have been more understanding. K. Jan Allison December 4, 2015 at 3:04 PM Its humourous but tinged with sadness Keith. I'd forgotten all about this poem then I found this in a notebook I write my poems in when I'm at work -I wrote the girls and boys one yesterday so thought I would post them on the same day :-) Hugs Jan xx