Not So Fast

fingers fiddling with
everything at frenzied pace
must slow to make love
                       

*For finger frenzy contest inspired by: Eric “Slowhands” Clapton and of 
course… “experience.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 11, 2010 at 11:23 PM
Settle down there, John! LOL- congrats on your win.
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June 11, 2010 at 10:56 PM
Congrats John on your success in my contest with this Senryu... appreciate your support of my contest.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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June 7, 2010 at 8:31 AM
Smiles John, a love the little delight in the finger frenzy contest. The best of luck 2 U.Have a wonderful day.-SKAT
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