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Not Salty Or Sweet

Goldilocks entered The cottage and felt hungry Three bowls of porridge One was too salty, one was Too sweet and one was just right* *very loosely based on the famous fairytale For Andrea’s Sweet or Salty contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/14/2013 2:43:00 PM
Loved the hungry bears write and best wishes for contest results Jack..'
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Date: 10/14/2013 11:02:00 AM
I'm sure Andrea will love this,, i know i do...
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Date: 10/12/2013 4:40:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love
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Date: 10/12/2013 8:56:00 AM
Jack a good take on the old tale, should do well....David
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Date: 10/11/2013 10:27:00 PM
Then the bears came home...oh boy, now that would be fun! You have expressed your creativity with supreme perfection! I surely enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a masterful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/11/2013 2:54:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your interpertation of the old children's story..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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