Hosea Griffith Poet Free verse

Not Right

something's not right.
the way we used to talk,
laugh and play,
joke all day
until.......
it happened.
i don't know what it was
but hey.....
it stopped the laughter,
the fun,
the playing
the love.
it stopped me.
when i now talk to you,
i feel a sudden hatred
a sudden pulse of dislike
that flows across mii face.
what happened?
im asking you 'cause somethings
not right.

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Sara Kendrick August 18, 2009 at 3:33 AM Nicely written, Hosea. Sometimes in relationships we'll never know and sometimes with very good commication things can improve. In my poem"The Piano" the idea came from a movie. It is not refering to me necessarily. Keep writing. Sara