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Semi-inspired by when a computer shows it's (Not Responding) message...you know what I'm talking about.
Pulling, I'm pulling, I'm not responding either. Jumping jacks inside my mind, A froggy essence. My mouth wants to hopscotch over every hill Though it feels to be, in a sweet sadness, trapped, shut, and forgotten as devices go. Just momentary spirits. A sweet sad spirit. the only vibrating in all this not responding.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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