Not Realizing By Being Incomplete

It was you who     could make my 
                           heart have little tiny feet.  That will go through 
                       any obstacles for yours & mines to meet.  Together 
                    forever, mines carrying yours like priceless treasure
                    No need for my LADY’S heart to have sweet tiny feet.  
                     It’s only I doing the walking for us. Going up our lane 
                      of love directed by our God, and the angels singing 
                         from above.  Connecting both minds constantly 
                             thinking; knowing; believing we are to be.
                             Actions showing we are not dangerously 
                                   but experiencing true love. Though 
                                       now realizing by being incom-
                                             plete is sinking mines 
                                                  hoping yours will 
                                                        never miss 
                                                           or skip a 
                                                              beat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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March 26, 2016 at 10:42 PM
Fred Benjamin III, you've expressed yourself well, I like the way you ended the poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Happy Easter ** LOVE LINDA
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August 10, 2015 at 7:30 PM
FRED, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*
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March 9, 2011 at 4:39 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Fred. Love Carol
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February 21, 2011 at 1:36 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Fred. Love, Carol
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