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Not Quite There 1 and 2 - Haiku

Not Quite There 1 And 2 – Haiku

  Not Quite There 1 – Haiku

stone drops, wind stops dead
between nature, yawn begins
return unused rain   
 

 Not Quite There 2 – Haiku

water falls, flowers
fragrances, time, all missing
stopped!.... only reaching

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/3/2014 7:30:00 PM
The interaction between the elements is a cause and effect that nature uses to create great beauty . . . which you captured nicely in a 5,7,5 presentation!
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 12/3/2014 8:19:00 PM
Hi David. Thank you for your observations. I'm still trying to capture a moment between moments before things come into existence. Things don't always happen in the moment. Sometimes they happen above or before the moment. I'm getting close. I'm glad you enjoyed my little creations. Have a great day. Earl

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