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Not Quite Springtime

fresh blanket of white icing up the tender shoots... green grass is confused windows steamed again blocking out the wintry scene... hoofprints in the yard squirrels look for seeds dig in snow for something more... false alarm for spring

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/25/2011 11:42:00 AM
*smiles* Great write dear poet ! Our false alarm came a couple of days ago...which gave us; 4" of snow ! lol much love, james
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Date: 2/24/2011 6:34:00 PM
It's still about three and a half weeks until the equinox, the official start of spring. Your triple set of haiku describes the scenery very well.
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Date: 2/23/2011 11:07:00 PM
that was cute. hoofprints in the yard. Great haiku set, deb!
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Date: 2/23/2011 3:40:00 PM
Wonderful imagery here ,Deb!Enjoyed your Haikus---kashinath
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Date: 2/23/2011 1:48:00 PM
Know that you are disappointed..Maybe it is just a short reprise in the weather and spring is on the way..Enjoyed reading..Sara
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