Deb Wilson Poet Haiku

Not Quite Springtime

fresh blanket of white
     icing up the tender shoots...
           green grass is confused

windows steamed again
      blocking out the wintry scene...
              hoofprints in the yard

squirrels look for seeds
       dig in snow for something more...
                false alarm for spring

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James Peranteau February 25, 2011 at 11:42 AM *smiles* Great write dear poet ! Our false alarm came a couple of days ago...which gave us; 4" of snow ! lol much love, james

Robert Pettit February 24, 2011 at 6:34 PM It's still about three and a half weeks until the equinox, the official start of spring. Your triple set of haiku describes the scenery very well.

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2011 at 11:07 PM that was cute. hoofprints in the yard. Great haiku set, deb!

Kash Poet February 23, 2011 at 3:40 PM Wonderful imagery here ,Deb!Enjoyed your Haikus---kashinath

Sara Kendrick February 23, 2011 at 1:48 PM Know that you are disappointed..Maybe it is just a short reprise in the weather and spring is on the way..Enjoyed reading..Sara