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Poetic Form: Haibun
Inspired: 2024 July 05
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A stitch in time saves nine, lest, out of step lose pep, 'ere gains back mislaid track; cruise control, lose neutral.
practice makes perfect as perfect is relative subject is practice

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Date: 7/6/2024 2:22:00 AM
Great play with words. Perfect.
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Date: 7/6/2024 10:01:00 AM
It's all ... well, you know.

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