Not Quite Haiku

oh bleak November
            soft crunch of winter's footsteps
                                           coloring the skies


John G. Lawless
©11/3/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dutta Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 11:58 AM
Winter Sky. Enjoyed
Dietrich Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 8:55 PM
Exotically wintery!!
Ashley Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 4:57 PM
Beautiful, evocative imagery, John. A striking haiku. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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November 3, 2018 at 3:22 PM
good one : )
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