Maclawrence Famuyiwa Poet Choka

Not on a Monday

The day I dread most
Silences fun five whole days~
Wake too soon, return too late;
Hours drag on like stones.
Alarm bells bury silence
Till weekends return with sparks.







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Contest: SHOW ME A CHOKA
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Poem date: June 6th, 2025
Contest Judged: June 10th, 2025 6:04:00 PM
Placement: Third

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Rob Carmack June 11, 2025 at 7:44 AM "Alarm bells bury silence"- nice. Congrats. Maclawrence Famuyiwa June 11, 2025 at 7:45 AM Thanks Rob.

Kim Rodrigues June 11, 2025 at 7:25 AM Sounds like school time! … Hours drag on like stones. Alarm bells bury silence… Congrats! Maclawrence Famuyiwa June 11, 2025 at 7:46 AM Thanks Kim.