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Not My Day

Cock-a-doodle-do,the sun is shining through, Light appears in the sky,darkness turns to blue, Sneakers or shoe,what do you think my boo, Left my umbrella at home,rain soaked my shoe, Achoo-acho-acho,now I have the flu, Head-ache and cold,seems I caught them too, My muscles are aching,shivering right through, Hate taking tablets,a cup of herbal tea will do, Ahhh-ya-yi,kicked the wall,my God what a blow, Wobbling to the bathroom,now I broke my toe, Sitting in the doctors' coach, perched like a crow, Darn plaster polish,messing up my flow, She loves me,she loves me not,what will this flower choose, Came home early,sick,battered and bruised, Heard basket ball on the t.v,my boo only watches news, Burst into the bedroom,to see her hugging another dude, Bye,bye,bye,pack your things and go away, I gave you my all,why,why did you stray, Woke up this morning,energetic and gay, One thing for certain,today wasn't my day...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/19/2013 2:04:00 AM
just the perfect definition of a day gone bad
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/22/2017 8:30:00 PM
lol a day gone all wrong,,thank you
Date: 11/12/2012 4:30:00 PM
Been in those days before but it makes me appreciate the better days when they come. Enjoyed. Michael
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/13/2012 3:30:00 PM
lol,me too michael,thanks much
Date: 11/4/2012 8:10:00 AM
I feel bad for laughing at the misfortune but you are a funny guy. Well done and I pray for you to have an amazing day and that this poem was a flight of fantasy not your reality.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/5/2012 4:47:00 PM
it's fantasy Richard,just expressing,thanks Richie
Date: 10/14/2012 12:35:00 PM
wow...bad day but expressed in a funny way,good write :)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/14/2012 5:12:00 PM
thanks Sandra,lol
Date: 9/25/2012 5:36:00 PM
Yeah... there will be days like that! Good poem... Terry
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/26/2012 3:44:00 AM
hope not very often,lol,thanks Terry
Date: 9/3/2012 4:53:00 PM
You had me chuckling with this poem and it certainly was not your day. A nice humorous poem. love phyl
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/5/2012 7:33:00 AM
thanks Phy,happy to make you happy
Date: 9/3/2012 10:20:00 AM
You are so talented!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/3/2012 10:27:00 AM
honoured,thank you very much Vesna
Date: 8/15/2012 9:46:00 PM
Ah!...a day of character buildig! lol! Good write Cynthia
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/16/2012 2:01:00 PM
yes it was,only kidding,thanks Cynthia
Date: 8/10/2012 3:51:00 PM
how true...it happen to me...i really want to learn to write like you! Even though i'm kinda like an old school type.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/11/2012 12:43:00 PM
thanks Lide,let your imagination go
Date: 8/8/2012 8:45:00 AM
What a lucky day! LOL. I love again this one. I enjoyed reading it. Excellent write. Thanks for sharing, Richard.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/8/2012 8:11:00 PM
thanks Leonora
Date: 8/6/2012 10:21:00 PM
the sound and tonality of your work lift me up...enjoyed the hip-hop feel of your morning's crack... well done, richard!..:)huggs
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/7/2012 9:41:00 AM
oxoxox thanks Nette,hope to crack you up some more lol
Date: 8/6/2012 6:26:00 PM
I like this one. It made me laugh. Sometimes it is not getting up atall. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/7/2012 9:40:00 AM
thanks much Lucilla
Date: 8/4/2012 10:23:00 PM
Your wit comes shining through Richard. Enjoyed.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/7/2012 9:39:00 AM
thanks Sherese
Date: 8/4/2012 8:21:00 PM
Very clever although I know this feeling...very descriptive and well written poem...
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/7/2012 9:39:00 AM
hahaha thanks Doreen
Date: 8/4/2012 1:25:00 PM
enjoyed this witty write, my friend
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/7/2012 9:38:00 AM
thanks Jack
Date: 8/4/2012 8:17:00 AM
What is your day, Richard? This is sure not everyone's day! Funny poem out of all that. That will give everyone gray hair. Entertaining. Love ya, Toquyen
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/7/2012 9:37:00 AM
love ya too Toquen,thanks much
Date: 8/3/2012 8:24:00 AM
awwh, what but a poetic observation and rant about a day in your life, richard... darn good job!..:) huggs
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/3/2012 7:05:00 PM
only kidding ,thanks Nette
Date: 8/2/2012 4:43:00 PM
Excellent write here Richard..I'm sure we all had these types of days at one point in our lives that we can relate to this..keep your head up!!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/3/2012 7:04:00 PM
always,thanks PG Ink
Date: 8/1/2012 10:37:00 PM
I will always love you....deep down in my heart your days are not lost... soup mail soup mail
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/2/2012 3:26:00 PM
thanks Carma,happy to know I have a shoulder to cry on,,
Date: 8/1/2012 5:20:00 PM
whoa that is a bad day....thank you so much for the well wishes and prayers for my health...I am still recovering but hopefully all will be well.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/2/2012 3:25:00 PM
it will be,thanks Doris
Date: 7/31/2012 6:30:00 PM
Well not sure the interpertation of your intent..That sounded like a very unpleasant day for you..Cold, flu, and all those bumps and falls..Interesting work for sure..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Your presence was uplifting..Sara
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/2/2012 3:24:00 PM
just being funny Sara,thanks
Date: 7/31/2012 5:44:00 PM
wow sounds like everyone of my days
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/2/2012 3:23:00 PM
hahaha hope your days get better Lisa
Date: 7/31/2012 3:56:00 PM
Wow, what imagery! Unfortunately I can relate.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/2/2012 3:22:00 PM
thanks Meera,just being funny
Date: 7/31/2012 3:12:00 PM
A day where everything is perfect (?) Who has...(?) - We have had tremendous rain and thunder all day. - Well done poem, wish for a better day tomorrow Richard. - big hug // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/2/2012 3:21:00 PM
haha never a perfect day,thanks Anne
Date: 7/31/2012 2:39:00 PM
I'd say it wasn't your day at all !!! Had to laugh though...fun stuff !!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/2/2012 3:19:00 PM
hahaha just being funny,thanks Debra