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Author's Notes: This poem, "Not Missing Love's Beat," is a new co-authored write by Liam McDaid and me. In this poem we touch on a metaphor concerning a man and a woman who are deeply and passionately in love with one another. And, as with other similar writes we've done in the past, the man and woman in this instance over time experience a convergence of their spirits, souls, and emotions as they unite as ONE while "not missing love's beat . . . ." (Gary Bateman, December 24, 2014) (Free Verse)

Categories: allegory, beauty, emotions, feelings, love, metaphor, and together.

Not missing love’s beat . . . . Sails to you this golden bright morning rising so high Sails waving with light, joy, and such promise and hope One smile gasping breathless always for you my love As you walk with me deeply into Eden’s very paradise Dancing my heart love on that yellow brick road of dreams Dying to be with you my love forever and ever and ever Dreams inside of eternal youth with my heart pounding so Awaiting the very day to come when I stand before you Down on bended knee holding your hands warmly smiling Kissing each and every single fingertip so exquisitely I shall ask you to be forever and always with me my love You will be my Queen with dazzling jewels of an ocean wide The other heartbeat echoing as two becomes one complete Our thirst for love and passion is almost unquenchable And my very psyche is afire with excitement when we caress Sleeping at night my love brings me into your dream world Where it’s me and you and you and me together floating Through the very ether of time breathing rarefied air so Deliciously as we’re hopelessly mesmerized in true love When I awake from our nocturnal dream trance so joyously We hold one another so lovingly and caress so warmly at once We kiss passionately and longingly in a most sublime spirit while Not missing love’s beat . . . . Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (December 24, 2014) (Free Verse)

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/27/2014 1:41:00 PM

smiling great to this piece poem of the day gary and also thank you everyone for the warm beautiful comments bless you all friends

Gary Bateman
Date: 12/29/2014 6:22:00 PM

Absolutely Liam!! There will be many more of these to come from us my Great Friend. Our styles and themes are merging more so over time and I wanted to let you know that it is indeed my pleasure to work hand-in-hand you since you are a poet of profound depth and artistry!! Best Holiday Wishes Mate!! Gary

Joseph May

Date: 12/25/2014 12:17:00 PM

Beautiful write and great collab......I was quite surprised to have Poem Of the day with a poem about surprises...Have a wonderful Christmas Gary..

Gary Bateman
Date: 12/25/2014 3:46:00 PM

Thanks Joseph. You had a most wonderful poem indeed and what a way to celebrate your Christmas with the honor or "Poem of the Day." I will stay in touch with your poetry, and please feel equally free to read any of the works I've written as well as the collaborated poems I do from time to time with my great friend Liam McDaid!! Merry Christmas and Best Wishes, Gary

Tim Smith

Date: 12/25/2014 7:57:00 AM

A wonderful collaboration my friends...Have a blessed Christmas.....Tim

Gary Bateman
Date: 12/25/2014 9:39:00 AM

Thanks Tim!! You have a most wonderful Christmas too!! Gary

Paul Callus

Date: 12/25/2014 3:49:00 AM

Another beautiful co-write from you two very matching poets. I feel that your collabs can carry on non-stop. Very romantic indeed. A top rating for it! // May I wish you a blessed happy Christmas and all the best for 2015. // paul

Gary Bateman
Date: 12/25/2014 9:33:00 AM

Paul, Thanks and all the best to you too for the holidays!! Liam and I are doing at least one of these per week as we have our own writes to attend to as well. Our respective talents appear to blend very well on the co-write topics that we undertake. Merry Christmas to you!! Gary

David Williams

Date: 12/25/2014 3:20:00 AM

Well done, I like it...

Gary Bateman
Date: 12/25/2014 9:25:00 AM

Thanks David so much and Merry Christmas and all the best to you!! Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/24/2014 5:20:00 PM

Hello Gary and Liam ! Very awesome romantic beautiful piece you both have penned here my very dear friends. I'm really in awe on how you two really put something together like this beautiful dazzling love poem here. You two never stop amazing me with your wonderful writing talents and how you make it work. You are great poets ! Your pens are golden! Very beautiful piece! I love it! A solid 7 +++ to each of you! Merry Christmas to you both! Have a great evening :) Love and hugs! xoxox D.

Gary Bateman
Date: 12/24/2014 7:10:00 PM

Hello "D" -- Yup, we just keep rolling them out. I've got another one right now I'm working on with Liam (in addition to my own writes that are planned and unending . . . no writer's block for me!!) Thank you so much for your super rating. God -- you make me blush sometimes with all the praise. Don't forget -- you are a quite talented and very gifted writer too!! Best XOXO, Gary

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/24/2014 2:54:00 PM

This is beautiful, although I know not intended, this poem for some reason made me think of the Europa, the Phoenician Princess. I wish you both, you and your families a very very Merry Christmas! Cheers

Gary Bateman
Date: 12/24/2014 7:15:00 PM

Thanks Arthur. I can understand why this would be so. But it was not intended. (Liam might respond separately.) Thanks for your Christmas wishes and the very same from my wife Ingrid and me to you and your family!! And Happy New Year too!! Best Always, Gary

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/24/2014 1:51:00 PM

just love how our pens melted together very beautifully gary in this piece wishing you and your dear wife a splendid christmas dear friend

Gary Bateman
Date: 12/24/2014 7:19:00 PM

Thanks Liam . . . "The words from the eternal Leprechauns ring true in the minds of Irish poets as they contemplate their words and verses and decide to wash them down later with some most excellent Irish!!" Cheers Mate -- And Merry Christmas to you and your family from Ingrid and me!! Gary