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Not Looking Deep Enough

It's not easy being the one who's never ready
while you lay, open,
naked of mind and soul,
chest split for easy reach.

I carve myself
a large canyon wound
through my middle.

I slide in a hand
and feel around for the answer
a selfish little demon
a skittish hunchback
a veracious loner
some self-destructive cog

After long nights
of careful disection,
still no answers are found,
only organs
older than myself.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/6/2010 3:35:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Alex. I hope you plan on being here and writing for years to come. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2010 5:45:00 PM
deep write
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