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Not Like the Rest

Let me slip into the crevices of your mind Implant myself within your memories I want to experience your thought process see how well defined Curious as I express I’d have no regrets I’d follow your memories back in time To know you better those memories I’d climb Wanting to know what made you “YOU” Struggles you’ve overcome and all that you do Past loves, friendships, pains, through the process that determined it was this person here that would grace me last soul searching decisions how you express, your burdens, assertions, decisions you faced, what gave you that WOW factor I want to know you inside and out, feel what you felt I need to show you I won’t hide, nor have any doubt To reveal how you make me melt.... babe I want to know you so deep, more than anyone else So we can grow, weep, have fun, see what cards your life dealt.... I want to know you and love you.... give you my best Because my love I must confess you aren’t like the rest... 1/10/21

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Date: 2/9/2022 7:56:00 PM
"So we can grow, weep, have fun" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/17/2022 8:51:00 PM
Thank you!:)
Date: 2/9/2022 1:24:00 PM
This is what brings a couple together in a closeness that lasts a lifetime. This is a lovely poem Brenda. Congratulations on your first placement. Blessings xxoo
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/17/2022 8:51:00 PM
Connie appreciate the read and lovely comment!:)
Date: 2/9/2022 8:22:00 AM
Dear Brenda; Congratulations on your win in the contest! A wonderful piece of art on the depth and richness of heartfelt love. Be Blessed, Neva
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/17/2022 8:51:00 PM
Thank you so much!:)
Date: 1/28/2021 10:34:00 AM
A wonderful read full of love and devotion, enjoyed!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/24/2021 1:30:00 PM
John thank you so much;)
Date: 1/17/2021 4:18:00 PM
Brenda, Beautiful Siren' verses from a favorite poet and Enchantress. You don't seem to struggle with words.., you beguile them and make them your own somehow. -Richard
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/24/2021 1:31:00 PM
Richard ahh thank you! ;)

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