Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Not Like the Rest

Let me slip into the crevices of your mind 
Implant myself within your memories 
I want to experience your thought 
process see how well defined 
Curious as I express I’d have no regrets 
I’d follow your memories back in time 
To know you better those memories I’d climb 
Wanting to know what made you “YOU” 
Struggles you’ve overcome and all that you do
Past loves, friendships, pains, through 
the process that determined it was 
this person here that 
would grace me 
last soul searching decisions how you express, 
your burdens, assertions, decisions you faced,
 what gave you that WOW factor 
I want to know you inside and out,
 feel what you felt 
I need to show you I won’t hide,
 nor have any doubt 
To reveal how you make me melt....
babe I want to know you so deep, 
more than anyone else
So we can grow, weep, have fun, 
see what cards your life dealt....
I want to know you and love you....
give you my best 
Because my love 
I must confess 
you aren’t like the rest... 

1/10/21

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Christuraj Alex February 9, 2022 at 7:56 PM "So we can grow, weep, have fun" - Beautifully written. Congratulations! Brenda Chiri February 17, 2022 at 8:51 PM Thank you!:)

Connie Marcum Wong February 9, 2022 at 1:24 PM This is what brings a couple together in a closeness that lasts a lifetime. This is a lovely poem Brenda. Congratulations on your first placement. Blessings xxoo Brenda Chiri February 17, 2022 at 8:51 PM Connie appreciate the read and lovely comment!:)

Neva Romaine February 9, 2022 at 8:22 AM Dear Brenda; Congratulations on your win in the contest! A wonderful piece of art on the depth and richness of heartfelt love. Be Blessed, Neva Brenda Chiri February 17, 2022 at 8:51 PM Thank you so much!:)

John Hamilton January 28, 2021 at 10:34 AM A wonderful read full of love and devotion, enjoyed! Brenda Chiri March 24, 2021 at 1:30 PM John thank you so much;)

Quoth Theraven January 17, 2021 at 4:18 PM Brenda, Beautiful Siren' verses from a favorite poet and Enchantress. You don't seem to struggle with words.., you beguile them and make them your own somehow. -Richard Brenda Chiri March 24, 2021 at 1:31 PM Richard ahh thank you! ;)