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Not Letting Go

Small hands hold secure
Not wanting to let it go.
Fearful of losing
What I may never obtain,
You take it and I will cry.

Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Copyright © Caryl Muzzey | Year Posted 2011

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April 12, 2011 at 10:47 AM

True character of a baby Caryl, enjoyed this. Wishing you all the best for Linda's contest and thank you for your kind comments :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 12, 2011 at 7:17 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Caryl. I wish you the best in Linda-Marie's contest. Love, Carol

April 12, 2011 at 12:22 AM

Nice Tanka Caryl.Enjoyed.

Andrea Dietrich

April 11, 2011 at 10:59 PM

awww,that is so cute, just like a baby might be thinking.

April 11, 2011 at 6:58 PM

Children are possessive of their things- "Mine, mine, mine," this little girl sings.

April 11, 2011 at 6:21 PM

Nice read of the picture in the contest, Caryl

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