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Not Just We Suffer

Sprinkled 'round is the shade beneath the dieing tree. Leaning to the left a bit, almost upon it's knees. As if begging for the water, that from its crown it can see. The home now vacant, foreclosed, the landscape left thirsty. it's not just families that suffer, in this upside down economy.
For the contest: Form Or Free, Up To Thee Sponsor..Brian Strand Placement: 5th

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Date: 7/9/2011 12:53:00 PM
the remnants of man, good win Paula! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 6/30/2011 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations Paula on your win in Brian Strand's "Form Or Free Up To Thee" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/27/2011 6:12:00 PM
wow, what a profound way to say it, Paula. Using the tree to represent poor nature suffering along with us all. Congrats with this wonderful poem.
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Date: 6/24/2011 8:08:00 AM
Congrats Paula on your expressive entry winning in the contest with this sad theme and so prevalent today luv..we are house hunting avidly too.. for one of my sons and it is very sad to see the conditions all around no matter where the area.. an excellent eye opening piece ..
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Date: 6/24/2011 7:55:00 AM
Very nice Paula.Congrats on your win.
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