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An appropriate reaction to gossips

Not Interested

A clash of disaster and bad luck wrestles in the house of one who wears the crown of pride and reputation air so troubling and disgusting with the whirlwind of dark moments pollutes his living room as his family's fate is turned upside down. All helping hands seem mysteriously amputated revival standing sideways having no eye contact with his predicaments Even the news itself comes out with blasts of shocks and the reality of its horror peels the feathers of hope with every ear burning to its sounds yours seemingly acting as no exception and yet all you can say is "oops"?
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Date: 11/9/2014 8:24:00 AM
Hey Funom! You are a master of imagery and metaphor, while remaining technically grounded. "Not Interested" is a great concept...why just this morning I threw out my tin of bitch biscuits...they were dry & stale. I've concluded that with each bite I took, I'd been feeding another's ego (not yours). Keep well...Mikki
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Funom Makama
Date: 12/5/2014 9:45:00 AM
Thank you so much Mikki
Date: 10/10/2014 4:50:00 AM
I totally love the line : A clash of disaster and bad luck wrestles in the house of one who wears the crown of pride and reputation....... a well pointed out write Funom. Enjoy it as ever
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/28/2014 7:32:00 AM
Woow! Thanks a lot. I'm so lucky and happy on the way you've been romancing my poems these days. I need to reciprocate
Date: 9/26/2014 9:03:00 AM
I have know people like this :( Thank you so much I really enjoyed eve
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/28/2014 7:33:00 AM
So true Eve! So true! They exist among us and this is just the best way to respond to them. Thank you so much for your comment
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