Not Heeding But Eating

Eve my dear, God's word to us you did not heed.
You ate of the tree then gave fruit to me we did not need.
I can't blame you my dear for it was really my fault.
I didn't have the balls to tell you no, so thus the serpents assault!

I ate the fruit too and my eyes were opened to view,
Things that I'd rather not had to deal with in this life so new.
The garden was so beautiful and we had to leave.
Now here we sit beside this fire with our memories and grieve.

I'll have to work by the sweat of my brow now,
And till the soil so we can grow food as God would allow.
And you'll bare children in very much pain.
And we'll learn to build houses to keep out of the rain!

After thought:
Is there an "If only?" I couldn't tell you.
In God's great infinite plan the grand over all view.
I believe it was meant to happen like it did.
But being a man I still want to blame Eve and in this I DO NOT KID!!!!!!!!!


Dedicated to my wife Linda....my EVE!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Carlson Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 11:00 AM
wow .... simply genuis
Mister Roboto Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 7:47 AM
2nd poem in a row I've read by you with "balls" mentioned! HA
Dufresne Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 3:48 PM
I got a kick out of this one, Marty....my wife says you and I are from the same mold..:) yup the Adam cast
Culverhouse Avatar
June 27, 2010 at 12:15 PM
Poor linda...Hope you are well, Have not seen any new writes from you lately! Hope to see you again soon in your great works.
Haick Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 7:59 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Marty! Hope you're doing well..Peace, Audrey
Fraser Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 1:08 PM
Marty, many congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's fine contest >> James
Mehta Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 5:20 PM
Congrats on the win
Sweetheart Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 4:43 PM
Congrats Marty on your success in my ADAM in Eden contest with this dynamic write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Milgate Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 10:04 PM
An honest Adam.. Good luck. Fun poem.
Devonshire Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 7:13 AM
Eve was quite the temptress, Marty, but ladies will argue that Adam had the power of free will. I do like the humor in this poem and wish you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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May 21, 2010 at 7:43 PM
funny write
Culverhouse Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 4:39 PM
I want to blame Adam...he did not stop her!! It is always the man's fault...
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 3:04 PM
hahaha, funny ending there. Yes, it was supposed to happen the way it did. I think some people don't even get that. Great entry and good luck, Marty! Luv, andrea
Diva Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 3:04 PM
I like this one very much Marty and wish you the best in the contest.. I entered in the Eve contest a few minutes ago. am new to this websie so hope to read more poems by you.. Satin Doll Diva
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