Kenneth Brenner Poet Rhyme

Not Forgotten

As I look down upon my body dead,
I have this fear in me as heavy as lead.
Have I done wrong in my life past,
or am I happy now, happy at last.
I look to the skies the heavens above,
I say to myself, remember the love.
God gave us creatures some big and some small,
he cares for them, and love he does all.
What should I fear, nothing I should,
I'm one of Gods creatures, I know this is good.
I look to the skies once more again, as I say aloud,
"Lord I know I have sinned, will you forgive me Lord,
and let me in to your sanctuary of love and not of sin."
"Is it to late to say what I've said,
now that I'm gone, now that I'm dead."
"Its never to late", I hear from above,
"come into heaven and feel all the love."

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Natalie Jackson May 5, 2020 at 11:03 PM this is so deep and I understand it so well <3

Silent One October 14, 2019 at 12:46 PM Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Kenneth Brenner October 16, 2019 at 1:19 AM thankyou very much, and as well as having contest. As a sponsor for contest it means a lot to also have a comment, thankyou again. :-)

Susan Ashley August 29, 2019 at 9:52 AM A pensive, moving and tender poem, Kenneth. It’s beauty reveals that it’s never too late for a humbled soul to seek forgiveness. Exquisite thoughts and emotions are expressed in your spiritual introspection with your last lovely line bringing Divine comfort. Just beautiful, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan P. S. sorry I’ve been away so long :) Susan Ashley September 8, 2019 at 10:25 PM I so completely understand, my dear friend. You and me it seems, are in the same busy boat these days.. I haven’t had much time here either lately nor time to write unfortunately.. but such is life sometimes.. Kenneth Brenner September 7, 2019 at 10:30 PM Susan, as always, thankyou so valuable much, for your respected opinion and comments. :-) this poem is rather old I wrote it some time ago, at more unfortunate times. God Bless you always my friend...I apologize for late response ive been so busy but I'm also in the process of producing poetry at its finest. lol. just taking time that is unavailable. :-)

Lady Labyrinth May 20, 2019 at 6:14 PM I have to agree with your comment above. Why no placement? You can write man...exceptionally well. Kenneth Brenner May 20, 2019 at 10:20 PM lol..i have no clue..:)..but..you flatter the crap outta me..ill never achieve the works as yourself, I'm so humble with being a fan. Thanking you doesn't do justice..for real..my pride of writes, I hope will continue your reading pleasure.

David Mchattie April 10, 2019 at 5:53 PM Lovely poem on a very complicated question. Is what we've done, enough? Kenneth Brenner April 10, 2019 at 6:59 PM Thank you David for comment..so much..i wrote this years ago on a news years eve..by myself..contemplating an end..i wrote instead.thankyou again.