Not Flawed

“Simplicity is the ultimate sophistication”.

That Mona Lisa portrait I got painted "flawed".
I was restless. It's a competition. She said:
'It's okay. Mona Lisa, you so much applaud.
The universe is well-knit in a holy thread…

Throw out that "mask" that covers you from seeing all,
That needs to be seen in sincerity and truth;
When the mirages are "torn" and truth loudly bawl
You will see me, the Mona, hidden in your booth’.

I have a Mona within; Lisa she needs not,
Though she seems "imperfect", she's ever perfect truth.
This Mona tells me, imperfections are a lot,
What one needs to pursue is paths with perfect youth.

When I heard what my Mona, my sweetheart had said,
My mania of such Mona Lisa got "cracked".
There born a love for a Mona who's no more dead,
That has withstood much a long loan lineless "facade".

Mona, Lisa, or Monalisa - the same truth…
 Meanings get "broken" when we get misunderstand.
"Illusion", indeed, plays a role crookedly smooth,
Even gods of heavens not fully understand.

Mona, I love you for revealing this great truth.
I love you now so much more than ever before.
The outlook of truth that all your life’s ever youth,
Turn the tides of dilemmas to real love lore.




15 June 2021
Writing Prompt - Flawed - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 5:01 PM
Christuraj, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Flawed _ Challenge with your wonderful poem. Good use of the required words and I like your quote, peace _ Constance
Alex Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 10:20 AM
Thank you very much.
Evans Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 3:30 PM
Congratulations. Yes, simple is more.
Alex Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 8:45 PM
Thank you very much.
Y. Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 6:35 AM
WoW! Christuraj, You took the chosen words and composed a good entry. I will not view Mona Lisa the same. Good content and rhymes. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Alex Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 6:40 AM
Thank you very much.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 2:46 AM
Profound, introspective, and inspiring poem, my dearest friend, Alex. Blessings.
Alex Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 2:59 AM
Thank you very much.
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